Some people say that in the modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s era, writing in hand is considered to be increasingly less significant to be taught with the popularity of typing. convenient as typing is, I think handwriting should be educated in children, well protected and inherited.
typing, as a newly emerging means of recording information, shows its strong vigor for its tremendous convenience in education. The biggest advantage is that typing leads to a rapid speed in recording information like notes compared to traditional handwriting while it is in an urgency that words or sentences must be fast recorded or something crucial would be missed especially in class or lecture. Meanwhile, information typed is also convenient to conserve or upload to the internet compared to paper which is easy to lose.
But handwriting has its own contribution to children especially in developing their study skills. In the process of children studying handwriting, they also improve their literal skills. while using traditional handwriting, they will strengthen their skills in memorizing educational materials. that is because when taking notes in hand, they will easily remember the content with writing again and again. Additionally, it promotes a better skill in writing with lots of practice.
Another benefit is that students studying handwriting which represents the unique culture of its country, will strengthen their sense of belonging to their motherland and it will be protected and inherited better in return. Language generally plays a vital role in a country’s culture, in other words, shoulders the mission of preserving ethical memorial and handwriting is one of a most primary method to conserve and inherit it. when children are taught with this method, they will understand the words meaning, its origin, development and evolution process better. Thus, grasping these, they will find their sense of belonging to their country, unique and great culture. it will bring about better preservation and inheritance and even enrich the culture by putting into novel elements.
In conclusion, though traditional recording information means, handwriting undergoes strong hit by modern methods like typing using keyboards, it still has an irreplaceable role for children’s study and cultural protection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64161849711 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08131660362 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7169162927 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583532757517 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249783671218 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282036826348 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0359423939634 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03030757355 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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