The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes of these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future.
In today's era, global work has witnessed a rapid change whose conditions are vary from these before, people not depending on taking one job for living any more. it is stimulated by various aspects of reasons and I will also talk about the thoughts of employment preparation.
it is considered that the improvements of individuals' cognitive level can be a significant cause, people nowadays holding more evolutionary, flexible and international ideas on choosing career while there is no need to insist on the only one job. If a risk or financial crisis break out, they will protect themselves owing to some jobs instead of the only one, for meeting or guarding their basic living demands. Mental elements will also count, people under less pressure when taking up two or more careers getting rid of rigidly ancient thinking system. Away from the old thoughts, they can take up their work more freely without too much tension compared to the old days. increase of extensive exchange between countries including culture and economy may be another fundamental cause. During the period of exchange, people can be exposed to more information which is more evolutionary even revolutionary, and level up their own social and professional skills. After that, they may work on two or more jobs with their development.
As far as I am concerned, the youth even the elder today should equip themselves when encountering rapid changing world, overflowing with opportunities and challenges. one is supposed to take up the work cautiously, figuring out what he or she is really into or fond of, so he or she will work with passion leading to promotion and a promising future. Be adept in the major career and be familiar with other fields, resulting in the full-scale elites increasing. Lastly, a open mind should be equipped to accept new ideas in the globalism current.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, may, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04530744337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8008245752 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.600529427 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229349465689 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757158744857 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837548343159 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172816147835 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608337458507 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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