Many people believe that the increasing use of modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people's creativity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the use of modem technology has become prevalent both in the workplace and people’">people’s leisure activities. some people worry that this action may decrease people’">people’s creativity. however, I disagree with this opinion.
Indeed, there are people who use modem technology in ways that do not develop creativity. These breakthroughs, especially in the field of internet, sometimes discourage users to explore their own ways of thinking and making. it is widely reported that students in many countries are using the internet to plagiarise — to use other people’">people’s work and present it as their own. it is often claimed that the case with which music and films can be downloaded for free may dissuade producers from making them.
however, this does not necessarily mean that the advent of technology era will ultimately ruin people’">people’s creativity in all the aspects. After all, in many occasions, technological developments allow people to produce further developments. The new-born techniques facilitate people’">people’s productivity and inspire them to think more deeply into various matters. For example, the development of the telegraph and the telephone contributed to the development of radio and the mobile phone, both of which enables many people to become more creative-finding and allow people to share music and video through various apps, such as Twitter and Moment. Since the mobile phone developed, people have been looking at ways of using it. we can now send text messages around the world and even-use our mobile phones to pay for things.
this new-found creativity is not only limited to scientists and technicians. computers allow people to express their creativity by writing books and articles to be published online. other people have discovered their artistic works though using relatively easy-to-use computer programmes such as Photoshop. we can even see this creativity in computer games. games such as “World of Warcraft” enable people to develop online characters using their creativity to accomplish tasks.
In conclusion, I believe that modern technology has given people the opportunity to be more creative. Most people have taken that chance, but there are some who have not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79250720461 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.49180724586 2.80592935109 160% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5734870317 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8284670813 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286787712866 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103003076455 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755357115162 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182555627633 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322010463103 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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