There is no doubt that, nowadays, a not quite percentage of people tend to live along with their financial or carriers problems without working having developed circumstances. In this essay, I will discuss both point of views and will give why I agree on going with career and financial developments and improvements.
Accepting bad situations is considered as the best way by some individuals. Taking examples, when you are not satisfied with your job or in poverty, it may be the most suitable approach to adopt the condition. Sometimes people will be stressed or get panic, indignant or disappointed at the unsatisfying circumstances, which does harm to one's physical and mental health resulting from emotional frustration. Besides, our skills in adapting to the changes also develop. At the same time, we may hold another attitude towards bad conditions in our life which improves our cognitive skills. Experiencing various life situations such as success and failure, happy or unhappy time, dramatical or quiet circumstances, is the necessary period of growing up and the treasure.
On the other hand, some find it better to struggle and change. It needs efforts to reach that takes time and labour. But it can keep one energetic and positive in daily life, with power, enthusiasm and passion. After fulfilling it, you may feel a sense of achievement and exactly your life gets improved. Additionally, for moral values, it isn't absolutely nothing but meaningful. More importantly, our society, country and culture should be spirited although in faced with hardships or hampered by temporary problems.
As far as I am concerned, trying and improving bad situations is the more rational and effective approach when encountering unsatisfactory circumstances. Pain as we temporarily trapped in, we are still supposed to struggle and change, sometimes it is a boon for our growth to defeat it and be a hero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, still, thus, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22402597403 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06448619594 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7876500137 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143395003785 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425015453197 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485369283034 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074471745184 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221245005488 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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