Nowadays, technology plays a pivotal role in our society and help us get advanced lives. Some people say that with the development of technology, shopping became much easier than in the past while some people do not think in the same way. In my point of view, I agree with this statement that online shopping brings a lot of advantages.
It is clear that online shopping has more perks than the traditional way. Firstly, shopping through online websites saves customers' time walking around stores. By going to the official favorite brand websites, buyers could have a comprehensive view of all products they are looking for and there are a host of products which they could decide to buy. Secondly, comparing the price of various items on the online shopping community help final-users pick the best choice for them. Finally, with a big demand for buying and the population growth, stores have been more crowded and not enough products for customers. Therefore, online shopping will help those escape from pushing and lack of items.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks while shopping online. We are not able to feel the material of clothes which is crucial for experiences of final-users or unfortunately buy unreliable products. Especially, the most important problem is about sizing. It is risky to buy some clothes when you have not tried them on. Lastly, the products we ordered might be broken while shipping.
In conclusion, although there are a few drawbacks to online shopping, I honestly believe that the development of technology helped shopping today become easier and get an advanced life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ts they are looking for and there are a host of products which they could decide to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, honestly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06741573034 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62504871975 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9343685175 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194477365373 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642657208057 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748775578967 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127264658172 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632262715903 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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