It is believed by some that internet technology has made our purchasing more and more convenient in recent days, but some people do not like online shopping for some reasons. In my opinion, buying something via internet brings up actual convenience for us, whereas we still can improve it on some aspects.
On the one hand, some think it will be easier because buying online makes it possible that we do not need to go to the real shops. As a result, people can save their time for travelling there and then they would enjoy more entertainment in spare time. At the same time, consumers can scan and select more kinds of the products online in limited time therefore they can have more options when they choose their favourites.
On the other hand, online shopping is not friendly to someone is unfamiliar with electrical devices. For instance, some elders are not skilful at using iphone or ipad so they cannot buying something easily. And some persons will not choose shopping on internet because they do not like the process customers have to do when using the shopping websites, such as comparing the goods, reviewing the comments or using virtual currency.
In terms of my opinion, I believe that the online technology enhances our experience for buying what we want and makes it much more convenient. However, the owners and designers of the shopping websites should pay more attention to make it easier for some people who are not good at modern technology to be more accessible for entering the online platform.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...asily. And some persons will not choose shopping on internet because they do not like th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85823754789 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48967274333 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6523062076 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163046175789 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726945244631 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540425196334 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110371049919 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048451331259 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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