Nowadays, job decision is the hottest topic for all job seekers and students who are looking for jobs in the future. Some people think that the satisfaction in working is more important than job security, while others say that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent is more essential. In my point of view, both statements are true depending on their situations, but I am more likely to favor my dream job instead of a job that I can work for a long time.
To begin, the satisfying feeling when working brings to employees a variety of advantages. Firstly, working on the job you are interested in boosts your performance and avoids the tiredness and depression of working. People who take part in their favorite jobs can even spend almost all of their time working. On top of that, being able to follow your dream and your passion will enhance your happiness and makes you enjoy the beauty of the world.
On the other hand, finding a stable job also has some benefits. At first, people who have a permanent job can maintain the salary paid every month and will not face with any risks about finance or health. Moreover, engaging in a company after a long time will help employees attain more experiences to get a higher income.
In conclusion, although both have their own perks, honestly, I think people should follow their dreams and do whatever they want instead of having a stable job which makes their lives become meaningless.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, honestly, look, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76679841897 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51247881537 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2658520706 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509216817376 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178747462085 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136894529306 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281015981858 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136915894729 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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