Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days, public debate has been going on over whether music has a vital way for bringing people of different areas and ages together. It is my firm conviction that music has positive effects for people in order to broaden knowledge about other cultural and understand some kind of particular traits of ages.
Listening to music has a wealth of advantages. To start with, music is the medicine to reduce or cure for people who ill. It is well-known that when people falling in music with slight melodies, dramatically lyrics and some scenes in the music video, they have felt the identical sense which the same with authors and singers in s while. For example, some of authors in Viet Nam have survey that what people feeling after listened their songs. As a result, lovesick people have happy of sense. The good another example is that in the epidemic of Covid-19, the song called "Let's fighting, doctors" or "Vietnam can do it" have given power for doctors, nurses and even residents.
On the other hand, music is bringing characteristics of one's country. As a matter of fact, when author produce any songs, any melodies, they also have complied with the rule of their culture. Obviously, in the world, the music of United State or Korea have had other specific traits. For instance, the music of Korea is giving strong melodies that these songs are shown by singers in one groups, namely Blackpink, BTS, SNSD,... Almost songs of this country also are slight and romantic. The second point with respect to music could assist to make clear age's inmost feelings. Almost audiences assumed that they can hear some stories in the songs, which are the private stories. With derived from sense of human, authors have stayed together ages in other groups in order to locate people. They can make friend, talk anything and erect many social in Facebook, Instagram,... for example groups of people like Taylor Switch, group of people like slight songs no lyrics,...
In conclusion, on the basic the above idea, I reckon that music has essential way for increase people's life consist of the life of matter and even innermost feeling of human. Accordingly, it would be advisable for people to connect together which cannot destroy by any ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result, to start with, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94488188976 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44312830972 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3669452255 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293706037836 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855059203565 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532805284801 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184153582357 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412627109651 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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