Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, public debate has been going on over whether self-employed have chosen of many people, compared with work for a company or organization. I will outline several reasons for this and many negative effects to this issue.
One obvious issue that, nowadays, almost people have been worked at home. The first reason for this trend toward is that people who are a member of rich family, after their graduation, they could work in their home, because of they have a lot of money for life. In addition, they would have much time for chill or broaden their knowledges, which do not need go to any organizations to learn. For example, researchers argue that if people work in industry companies, they will must work in 8 hours from 8 am to 5 pm. By contrast, when people choose to be self-employed, they are having space time in order do other work in the same time. The survey at 2018 of a student at Hanoi National of Education have resulted with over 60 percent people who like more significantly increase choose do work at home more than others. Others point out that, as many characteristics of human, some teenagers have lazy thought as do not want go out for work, thus they only do their jobs in website on the laptops or mobile phones. For instance, people major in business could order products in websites, after that, when this products was appealed for consumers, they will receive pay for money of this. As a result, people still work at home that the job do not to meet for live anyone.
Working by self has a wealth of disadvantages, which have drawback impacts for employees' life. To start with, communication skill of people choose to be self-employed have sharply dropped. Some professors of Industry of University in Vietnam assume that 6 in 10 of people in the same group which people work at home have lower of ability of communicate than people do in companies. People exchange with others by smart machines instead of meeting with their partners in real life. Furthermore, ability of suffer lose have increased. If people contact with their employees, partner or consumers, they will know that others want what the things is in their companies. Go far, people can solve some errors, improve their benefits. The opposite was true for people choose to do self-employed, they could not real of feedbacks from their partners.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why the case be might and some disadvantages of this trend. People should choose work for companies or organizations in order to learn some skills, as possible as experiences before open any private works at home. To address this issue, governments and individuals who are working at home must back think to make the economy of country raise on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...duation, they could work in their home, because of they have a lot of money for life. In additi...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to go'?
Suggestion: to go
...den their knowledges, which do not need go to any organizations to learn. For exam...
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Line 3, column 788, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to do'
Suggestion: to do
...like more significantly increase choose do work at home more than others. Others p...
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Line 3, column 1107, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... products in websites, after that, when this products was appealed for consumers, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80720338983 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64275605092 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506355932203 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4237040009 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.136363636 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298849833257 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988147060367 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076700826375 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20486746463 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185003395689 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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