Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Obviously, the music is one of focal points of national culture. And people have divergent opinions whether music alleviates cross-cultural boundaries and facilitates generation relationships. Although, I think people overestimate the music impact levelling the differences between generations and cultures, it is of note strengthens national and ages bounds.
On the one hand, the grave issue in generations lack of understanding is that grown and elderly people do not tend to be great fans of current music flows. They often opt for music that they are used to listen during their formative years, whereas youngsters listen modern top charts. This preference diversity even fosters the increase in generational gap leading to misunderstanding between adults and children. For instance, the list of USA trending singers includes the Eminem, Kanye West and Rihanna, whose tracks are universally spread both internationally and domestically. But it is rather difficult to imagine several old people who will be fond of brash rap and sugary pop songs. As opposed to youth, they would prefer intricate melodies and insightful writing of The Beatles or the raw sincerity of old school rap.
On the other hand, music is a major distinguisher of national culture, which, probably, will not decipher the country’s history overall, but could provide audience with instantaneous overview of the current cultural trends. I mean, some talented musicians are able to give the deep message through their melodies, that would be understandable even for people from diverse cultural backgrounds. One of such impeccable examples could be Bob Marley’s music, because he made up the melodies that ward off universal feeling of love and nation empathy. Moreover, Bob Marley creation was positively contrasting against the political biases and economical upheavals inside country at that time. Thus, any person was inspired by this compositor and his music is still widely recognizable almost in each corner of the world and by every person despite of the age.
To conclude, although music may actually do more to divide the young and old it definitely uses its universality to bring together different cultures and mediate cross-cultural relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to listening'.
Suggestion: used to listening
... They often opt for music that they are used to listen during their formative years, whereas y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, whereas, for instance, i mean, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47976878613 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04209938571 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.984194061 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232857461374 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691638508343 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597704802737 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14776566202 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472219079977 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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