It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.
Media evolvement and influence has had an increasing tendency during the last few decades. It is commonly used source of valuable information, new updates of promotions and generally the indispensable tool to recognize worldwide news. But despite multitude of advantages, the fast-paced spread of media involvement causes the range of people’s woes.
On the one hand, mass media provides population with global information exchange: we are able to acquire any knowledge from each part of our world. In other words, it increases people’s awareness about current issues worldwide and evaluate chances to be deceived. To be continued, it is obvious that mass media advancements offer a wide range of precious opportunities for self-development and extra studies. The Internet has a plethora of websites that collect and provide their users with extensive and reliable knowledge. The general examples could be Wikipedia and YouTube. For instance, the last one forces majority of students to simplify their learnings, research on various project works and case study, offering many videos from diverse backgrounds.
On the other hand, the wide spread of media influence has substantially detrimental effects on our society. It is commonly proven, that students and elderly people are addicted to the mass media information above all. Old ladies and men are plagued by television, news paper dependence, whereas students waste the majority of their leisure time online. Following, they are mostly depended on the false information, that contains political biases, monetary gaining and other social rubbish. Besides this, mass media absorbs the great deal of population time, which they can devote for sport, strengthening family bonds and self-realization. What leads to increasing level of susceptibility to line of illnesses: laziness, anxiety, obesity and other health disorders.
To conclude, I reckon that mass media disadvantages overweight its advantages. Nevertheless, it is rather impossible to imagine our current life without mass media involvement due to the high-fast trend of globalization. So, the best way for everyone to filter internet proficiency and utilize mass media information reasonably.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...dies and men are plagued by television, news paper dependence, whereas students waste the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, for instance, i reckon, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6686746988 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10434493387 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623493975904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8097205818 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145598727082 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480822759397 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489151097334 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957833140426 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304343354408 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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