The magic power of music is not just being appreciated by the local people where it originated.As my concern, music is valued greatly in uniting people of different cultures and ages. I will elaborate on my views as follows.
First of all, even the genres or styles are varied among different cultures,the essences of music are similar. We play music for happiness, the rythms are all in rapid pace, We play for the bitterness of lives, the tones are all low. Once the famous musician Beetoven said, "Music is the language of the Gods". We can understand each other from other cultures by music.
Moreover, the significance of music is far away from being comprehended by alien people. In this fusing world, the music is transmitting fast like cusines from different cultures. The Qatar world cup games just ended. Except for the impressing football matches competed by top player, the main theme songs have spreaded to every corner in the earth. Once people listend to these songs, they feel encouraged and want to play on the pitch. Without any noticement, when people listened to the main theme songs of the previous world cups games, they would realize this represents the football, the people all over the world com togehter, and play together. This power of music has fueled the passion of football players as well as the fans for decades.
In all, as there are more and more firends from western contries learn to sing Peking Opera which populated in old people in China, the tranditional Chinese love stories "Hua Die" was modified to an concert played by violins and pianos, music contributes a lot to the culture fusion at all ages in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, except for, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5382660826 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.766505246 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188881741531 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601559491627 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621030359005 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124020862837 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504493561282 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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