Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your o

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days many people are willing to acquire a second language. In large portions, foreign languages are not use as much as native language, but it is a very useful skill.
The main function of foreign languages is communicate with foreigners normally. For people who work and travel in overseas countries, foreign languages can help them to integrate into local society. By contrast, a second language might be unnecessary for people who live in their own country. In the home country, most things around are explained in people’s mother tongue, such as books, movies and advertisements.
On the other hand, learning foreign languages not only for travelling and living beyond seas, but also have a better understanding of foreign culture through foreign language. Language is the crystallization of the long-term development of human society, and culture and language are closely linked. For example, chinese poems, although many are translated into foreign languages, but they cannot beat the original works. By acquiring foreign languages, people can understand foreign anthology and music, also feel foreign culture in person.
In my view, foreign languages is a very important skill, it can help peopla to broadening their horizons. For example, in the field of academic research, learning foreign languages have great advantages, because foreign languages can help people draw upon the expertise of other countries. Bilingual of multilingual also tend to have a better job prospect. As modern society are become more and more international, acquiring foreign languages will become a popular trend.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'communicated'.
Suggestion: communicated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, for example, such as, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48995983936 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89703298499 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1896221794 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368902193679 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132811875526 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900114554199 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227714246607 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503556731511 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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