Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your o

The phenomena of globalisation has sparked interest in people to explore and experience different cultures. An integral part of which, is the language. Due to this, the number of multilingual people is on the rise however, a certain section of population is still skeptic about learning a new language unless it is necessary for work or travel abroad.

One of the major reason to learn a new language arises when one decides to work or travel abroad. It becomes necessary to be fluent in the language to adapt faster into the teams or to interact with the local habitants. This knowledge, however, is rendered useless if a person is working in his own country while dealing with people in his mother tongue. The lack of regular practice will make a newly learnt language, moot and unusable.

However, if one manages to maintain regular usage of a foreign language, it unlocks their mind to something new. The knowledge of multiple languages helps in development of analytical and problem solving ability in people. Research indicates the people who are polyglot are better in making decisions and solving problems during crisis. In addition to this, the experience of learning a new language is exciting and surreal. Furthermore, it also gives us opportunity to interact and learn from the exchange students at universities or tourists in our city.

Despite the thinking of a faction which still works on the philosophy of not working on things which is not needed, I believe it is a modern day requirement to be able to speak more than one languages. In fact, I am fluent in 2 regional languages and a foreign language apart from English and Hindi. Knowing more than one language, also adds to one’s employability. For instance, the premier research organisation in India, DRDO gives preference to engineers who can understand German, French or Russian so that they can optimally use and decipher manuals and research archives from their allies while working in India. Overall, a lot of us feel the need to explore and learn something new in their leisure time and a foreign language usually quenches that thirst.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
The phenomena of globalisation has sparked interest in people to explore a...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one language', 'a language', or simply 'languages'?
Suggestion: one language; a language; languages
...quirement to be able to speak more than one languages. In fact, I am fluent in 2 regional lan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00281690141 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77946389788 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6407388282 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.470588235 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203285844751 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06089467056 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441066610622 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123238901464 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00508751098324 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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