Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp

Nowadays, Learning foreign languages becoming a necessity to meet various purposes. Nevertheless, According to some individuals acquire foreign languages only require either for travel or work in overseas countries. While others believe that there are other many reasons to learn a foreign language besides above both reasons. In this essay, I will discuss both views along with my personal view related to this topic.
Some individuals reckon that Acquiring a foreign language is an only necessity for traveling and work in abroad. This is because when you willing to work or travel to overseas countries then you have to learn their language in order to survive in unfamiliar atmosphere. The reason behind is that in your destination country their culture and speaking language will be different in comparison to a home country. their foreign helps you to converse easily with their community and experience a new culture. The good illustration of this that a destination where you are immigrating their community would not able to interact with you in your mother tongue
On the other hand, Other people think that, There are many other requirements for learning other languages besides the purposes to travel as well as work. This is because foreign language like English is commonly being useing across all over the world. For instance, Even though India country language is Hindi, Majority of people talk with each other in English languge. Moreover, India is a country of diversity of religion with their own spoken languages. So it is become difficult for people to converse with each other in their own language. Where English become link between those diffrent languages. In my opinion foriegn languages like English became very benificial for people to expand their knowledge about every various sector through internet. because on internet if you search something the data appears in English language. Furthermore, The majority of information on wikipedea is given in English language.
To put into nutshell, Both sides have their own merits. However, I think that lator view is more reasonable. As I discussed above foreign language helps you to gain knowledge and at the same time experience different culture.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25842696629 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6559371265 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.356669324 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344648639612 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105851164996 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807464415942 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223804444806 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979203764947 0.056905535591 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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