Happiness is considered to be one of the crucial aspects of our lives. However, There is no specific definition of happiness, It differs from person to person. In this essay, I will provide important factors which will help you to find happiness.
Happiness is a sense of satisfaction which distinguishes from person to person very the same situation. Everyone finds happiness in doing different things or activities. Nevertheless, there are several ways to achieve happiness in one life, Firstly, We should feel satisfied with what we have already in our lives. Secondly, We should compare ourselves with poorer such as;who are not able to fulfill their basic necessities like food, water, clothes etc, Moreover who does not have amenities that we have like home,electricity etc, This because, whenever we compare ourselves with them for such things we feel blessed and that what make you happy that we at least have that facilities that someone other unable to afford. Whereas, If you do compare yourself with other wealthy individuals, You will never be happy in your entire lifespan, The reason behind is that you are interested in someone else life, You not looking towards what you have or be satisfied. Thirdly, We should concentrate on the present instead of worrying about past wrong deed. Finally, we should maintain a healthy relation relationship with our family, relatives, friends. Because it has proved that a person who involved socially is happier than lonely people.
To put into a nutshell, It is impossible to define happiness because everyone perception and perspective towards happiness is different. As I discussed above, There are many ways to find happiness in life.
Happiness is considered to be one of the crucial aspects of our lives. However, There is no specific definition of happiness, It differs from person to person. In this essay, I will provide important factors which will help you to find happiness.
Happiness is a sense of satisfaction which distinguishes from person to person very the same situation. Everyone finds happiness in doing different things or activities. Nevertheless, there are several ways to achieve happiness in one life, Firstly, We should feel satisfied with what we have already in our lives. Secondly, We should compare ourselves with poorer such as;who are not able to fulfill their basic necessities like food, water, clothes etc, Moreover who does not have amenities that we have like home,electricity etc, This because, whenever we compare ourselves with them for such things we feel blessed and that what make you happy that we at least have that facilities that someone other unable to afford. Whereas, If you do compare yourself with other wealthy individuals, You will never be happy in your entire lifespan, The reason behind is that you are interested in someone else life, You not looking towards what you have or be satisfied. Thirdly, We should concentrate on the present instead of worrying about past wrong deed. Finally, we should maintain a healthy relation relationship with our family, relatives, friends. Because it has proved that a person who involved socially is happier than lonely people.
To put into a nutshell, It is impossible to define happiness because everyone perception and perspective towards happiness is different. As I discussed above, There are many ways to find happiness in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ll provide important factors which will help you to find happiness. Happiness is...
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...which will help you to find happiness. Happiness is a sense of satisfaction whi...
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...ch as;who are not able to fulfill their basic necessities like food, water, clothes etc, Moreover...
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...d, water, clothes etc, Moreover who does not have amenities that we have like hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18248175182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79877278389 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1994878626 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395188311138 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166869131552 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176246041085 0.0667982634062 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.412831981531 0.151304729494 273% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.416713272182 0.056905535591 732% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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