Some people say that a foreign language can help them for work and travel easily in overseas. While, others people believe that there are more reasons to study a foreign language than reasons for work and travel. This essay discusses the question from both points of view and I will give my own perspective on the matter.
On one side, it is obvious that people are keen to learn a foreign language in order to work or travel in a foreign country. The main reason is to communicate easily with local residents. More specifically, foreign language plays a significant role for helping people live in overseas. For example, the basic conversations are needed such as ordering food, asking for direction and so on. Furthermore, a foreign language enables people to work effectively in their areas. For instance, applying jobs in an overseas company, employees must influence English as part of employer’s requirement in order to get a job.
On the other hand, there are more benefits for people who learn a new language. First of all, people can study abroad. For example, 6.5 score in the IELTS test is required by the top universities in the United Kingdom. Additionally, to explore an overseas culture and need to know more the unique culture of them. For instance, a humorous short story in America, even if this is already translated in my native language, I will still get confused with the story. This is because a language wordplay.
In conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I tend to
believe that learning a foreign language has more benefits than travel or work. This is because the merits of opportunity for study in top education institution and understanding culture abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01038062284 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79450702719 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7283998655 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39540872866 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121792527965 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115352224398 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208926497835 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143736287139 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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