Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution.
Discuss both modes of work and give your own opinion.
Since, in this modern era it becomes arduous task for humans to fulfill their basic needs, therefore they need to have a secure source of income. A part of crowd accord that running a business is having its own benefits which job in company lacked for. I firmly support the given notion as being an enterprenur person can have numerous advantages such as one would have no need to follow someone else's orders and can work independently.
To embark with, self employed person can choose the field of job according to his interest and also can invest as per their budget. For example, if a person is a good painter he can open his own art gallery and can make money through it. Moreover, when a person have his own company he would not answerable to anyone for his mistakes unlikely the job in company.
Furthermore, while running a business one can have a flexible hour as well as setting, which will aid him to have healthy family life. To illustrate, while working from home one can spend time with family and also can do house chores. Likewise, in some sort of business all the family members could be involved, that aid them to avoid any stress to hunt for job. To exemplify, my friend's mother is running a boutique, where her father is a cashier, while she work as stock manager in this way the whole family are working all together and are employed.
On the other hand, job gives a sense of financial security, since one will always get his salary credited whether the company is in profit or loss. Moreover, it gives an identity to the employee in the organization he is working in. Along with it, the person gets promotion according to his performance, which motivate him to work harder.
In summary, I assert that, it is irrefutable that job in a company always push employees to give their best to grow within organization, however business have numerous benefits that make it more preferring mode of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in summary, sort of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65395894428 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47766747069 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571847507331 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2474488922 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159390850198 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616574700409 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418288362662 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971194258871 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300558789903 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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