Many parents today do not spend much time with their children.
Why is this?
Does this affect parents or children more?
Nowadays, most of the parents do not have much time to spend with their children. Since they are working and in run of reaching the pinnacle of their career, they are unable to spare some time for their children. As children are more vulnerable and it can put far more detrimental impacts on them than their parents.
To commence with, having busy schedule and surrounding technology restrict the parents from having happy family time. To get succeed in their career, parents are giving more time to their work. Even most of the times, to complete the assignments on given timeline, they also carry work to homes. So, the time they are supposed to spend with their children, they usually utilize to complete their office work. Besides, if they get some leisure time, they often get allured towards social media applications on their mobiles and tablets. Hence, busy working hours and addiction to technology make it difficult for parents to spend some quality time with their offspring.
This less interaction of parents with their children, affect the children more. It put a devastating impact on their mental health, as they get no attention and love from their parents. For example, it has been proved in many surveys that the number of cases of mental health issues among children have been increasing with an accelerated rate. Most of these children have working parents, who are unable to give quality time to their children. Moreover, children often get indulged in some offensive activities, when they know that no one is observing them. These things realise parents of their bad parenting, which causes stress to them. Hence, apparently less attention from parents can damage the mental health of the children.
In summary, due to tight schedule, parents often fail to give time to their children and it harms badly the mental health as well as the behavior of the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03797468354 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41283720297 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7145256688 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43146003235 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168611794873 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129743245034 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296983476697 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062424147837 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.