Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Tourism is one of the main indicators of development because of it serve as a huge industry of the country. However, this in turn could has un healthy impact on surroundings and regional lifestyle.
The most important baleful influence is overdevelopment of the tourist country. The main reason behind this, is that travellers visitwell known areas, so these parts of country need to build more hotels, restaurants. As a result, tourist industry has decreased natural areas and deforestation. These in turn could have a harmful effect on the atmosphere, where amount of exaust fumes and air pollution is increasing.
Another disadvantage of tourism is the negative effect on young local people. The presence of tourists affect them by overseas culture, as a consequence, inhabitants may ignore their tradition which might lead to problems preserving the traditional culture.
Furthermore, increase the number of tourists leads to diminution of value of important ancient historical places. It means, that these areas are becoming target for business. Therefore, there arr quite a few numbers of citizens, who still have not visited historic landmarks of their country.
There are a lot of effective ways to prevent such negative impact. To illustrate, inspite of the fact, that there are many popular places to visit, tourist ca join in some new adventures such as a sailing or focus on eco-tours to preserve the environment. Also, learning the local culture, traditions before their travelling shows their respect, which is the relevant point, that tourists should remembee. Even though, the local tradition is completely unusual for them they should not disturb the local population.
In conclusion, travelling activities has its benefits in favour of the economy aspect of country and at the same time it negativly affects to regional culture and environment. However, tourists can prevent these impacts if they responsibly approach to this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39869281046 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92859327154 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2096662046 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209937158883 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614286967691 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531841506907 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949771094568 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422331419385 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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