Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Poverty is a global problem affecting even the most developed nations.people struck by severe poverty are homeless and beggars, who unfortunately do not have the means for a proper living. While it is a moral duty of an individual to help them in anyway possible, giving money is not the smartest option and sometimes this can lead to even worsening of their dire situation
There have been many cases recorded by governments and NGO's that majority of the poverty stricken beggars, tend to use the money on gambling ,drinking,smoking and other activities that affects their health both physical and mental.Obviously , many people cannot know what would be traded in for their penny given to the innocent beggar on the street, so it would be wise to understand the situation of the poor and what are his or her needs, which could be food,clothing or other basic amenities.In knowing so, we can directly provide them these items , which would even same them the hassle of going to the shop in order to purchase them.
Moreover, innocent and poor children whose parents are poor are sent to beg instead of them,which prevents them the opportunity to study and shape their future.Meanwhile, their parents are seen indulging in attrocious activities and living off on their child's earnings.Their parents are mostly motivated by the fact that a poor child's face attracts more attention than an old greasy adult's would.Furthermore,people would also give more money than they would to any adult beggar.
To care for beggars and poverty stricken people is a moral obligation of any citizen who can afford to do so.Despite the increase in fradulent beggars, we must not stop donating or helping the beggars who are genuine, and to distinguish between these two, you would need to stop giving them money and try to give them what they need directly.Furthermore, children should not be allowed to beg and giving out money to them would only make them continue their profession as a beggar on the streets, whose meager earnings go to their sinister parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, furthermore, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05501542609 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.330706241 49.4020404114 460% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 427.5 106.682146367 401% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.5 20.7667163134 412% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164690388745 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103791013705 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376810401038 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108310590312 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360552312792 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.9 13.0946893788 343% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.34 50.2224549098 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 11.3001002004 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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