Some people support the development of factory farming and the science creation of fruits and vegetables in agriculture, but others oppose to these development. Discuss both views.
Agriculture sector has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, few masses ponder that latest innovation in term of farming is lucrative for the development. While, others assert it useless. Here, I would like to discuss both views.
To begin with, there are a multitude of advantages when it comes to agricultural development. Firstly, the invention of modern and latest machines plays a paramount role to hike in output of harvesting. To illustrate, such advance machines not only work efficiently but also saves time during the process of harvesting. Thus, latest technology bestows us
with fruitful results. Furthermore, using technology such as tractors and doers will increase their productivity.
On the contrary, traditional farming produces fresh as well as hygienic food that teemed with proper nutrition. Therefore, consuming farm fresh fruits and organic food is the secret to have a healthier life. Moreover, many people prefer to purchase organic fruits and vegetables as they realize that qualities of this organic food are far better than industrialized ones.
From my notion, both aspects have their own significance. It is a fact that smart technology blessed us with advancement but I do believe that traditional ways are still better than modern one, as organic food are healthier for consumption.
To recapitulate, both approaches have their own benefits and drawbacks, but in my opinion traditional ways have no match with modern ones to get progress in agricultural sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48101265823 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00542217425 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2545164048 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127605214334 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447048163208 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460472288502 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592938164395 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050923924205 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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