Human activity has had adverse effects on plants and animals. Some people think that its too late to solve this issue. While others believe that necessary steps be taken to overcome this problem. Discuss your views.
Humans are considered as more dangerous species in today’s world than other animals. It is undoubtedly true that human activities have adverse effects on other living creatures. Presently, some masses ponder that nothing can be done to solve this growing concern. Here, I would like to discuss both views with my own perception.
To begin with, some people opine that damaging effect of some of our activities on wildlife cannot be resolved. To elaborate, various human actions such as deforestation, industrialization and many more leads to disappearance of many species which is impossible to get them back. Thus, nothing can be done now to reverse this extinction of species. Moreover, the concept
of green environment has faded away as beauty of nature is eradicates due to construction of houses on hills and mountains.
On the other side, “it is well said that it is never too be late”. Therefore, plethora of measures can be taken by government and individuals to halt detrimental effect of this phenomenon. Furthermore, individual can also spread awareness about the destructive effect of such devastating actions. Finally, stern laws as well as strict punishment work as panacea to maintain the purity of earth.
From my notion both aspects have their own significance. It is indeed true that recovery of such loss is a uphill task but I do believe that adequate measures be able to save the future species which is worthwhile for economy of every nation.
To recapitulate, it is still not too late to take initiative. If someone tend to stop this cruelty this is the right time to be firm and make commitment to ourselves to save God’s nature and creations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12949640288 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99704839014 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.861383691 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280105640922 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799351916579 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615011667959 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118527585267 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784580991326 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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