In modern society, it is argued that all criminals should receive prison sentences; however, others state that more and more effective methods can be taken to penalize these people. This essay will discuss both views and then I will give my own perspective.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people hold the belief that offenders should go to jail. In particular, prison sentences can be seen as a good way to reduce crime rate. By participating in useful activities inside the prison such as labor, vocational training and law-related content which has helped prisoners move towards a more positive life. Thus, they can become good citizens after being out of jail. In addition, when criminals are sentenced to prison, they have limited freedom in a particular area as well as be subject to the supervision of jailers. Therefore, they cannot commit illegal acts that pose a serious threat to society. Apparently, this significantly contributes to making society safer and more peaceful.
On the other hand, others think that there are better ways to punish lawbreakers. Firstly, the government should provide education and vocational training for people who commit minor crimes such as shoplifting or pickpocketing. This action helps them to learn and improve their job skills to earn a stable income by their own efforts. Moreover, by allowing these people to engage in rehabilitation programs, they have a chance to realize their mistakes and find themselves again. Besides, heavier punishments should be given by the authorities to those who commit serious crimes such as murder, espionage and embezzlement in order to punish these people as well as show the fairness of the law. By introducing severe punishments, the state can restrain a large proportion of those who have committed or intend to commit crimes that reduce crime rate.
To conclude, people possess different opinions about whether all offenders should be served prison or other methods can be used to penalize these people. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that they should be penalized based on the extent to which their behavior is a misdemeanor or a felony.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1776504298 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77712963231 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570200573066 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3276724188 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249949898854 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074456784533 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062603072131 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162049638574 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543852480701 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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