Some people think that all university students should study whateverthey like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Deciding which is a suitable university subject to study is a dilemma for many high school graduates as well as parents. Whereas some opine that students ought to choose the majors of their preferences, to others, learning something that are relevant in the future is advisable. This essay will analyse the abovementioned perspectives and a personal opinion will be provided.
There are a number of reasons why so university students should only study subjects that are useful in the future. To them, our civilisation is more associated with science and technology, rather than art and literature. That is why these subjects are believed to provide more jobs opportunities, higher salaries which eventually lead to students having better life quality. Besides, from an economical view, when students become expertised in the necessary fields, they are contributing to the nation’s economic development, and more inventions that are beneficial to human life emerge. Hence, for a country to be prosperous and economically stable, students should study something related to science and technology
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Although learning something that can be applied in the future in beneficial, to some people, student should be free to choose their going-to-learn major. Firstly, studying what they like creates passion in the students. In other words, they will take learning more seriously and enthusiastically, end up pursuing a job of their wishes, and provide paramount productivities for it. Moreover, no job is better than another as we can’t predict what major is going to be in great need in the future, so perhaps work related to art and literature would be more important in the future.
By and large, despite the belief that studying things that are related the future are advantageous to students, I still think it is better if high school graduates choose subjects that they like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, whereas, as well as, by and large, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31772575251 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97363227197 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1015959163 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367345164938 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125102754866 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797931573018 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206382293328 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430880902174 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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