Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views about choosing majors for the student. Opinions are divided on whether students should study whatever they like or whether choosing subjects adapts to social demands in the future such as science and technology. While I understand why some people support the later view, I am still in favor of the former.
Those who believe that choosing the discipline based on economic requirements may have several arguments. It is clear that the former view is a result of particular benefits it brings. At present, it is simple for students to get a job after graduating with a scientific or technological degree. These are crucial careers which governments as well as companies are requiring the vast of employees. Besides, a critical perspective without ignorance of those is their high salary level.
Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe that students should choose careers that they enthuse for several reasons. As far as the real experience, it is difficult for students to succeed without having enthusiasm. This is a motivation urging young generation determination to pursue their goals and achieve enormous achievements in their lifetime. One more thing, the pandemic covid19 has changed the awareness of the young about living. They would like thinking and active freedom and as a result more and more the youth people successfully choose to live with passion. This is an explanation why choosing careers relying on passion should be encouraging.
Conclusion, although learning base on social requirement having benefits, I still hold belief that the advantages of studying following the hobby are overshadowed by disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to base'
Suggestion: to base
...uraging. Conclusion, although learning base on social requirement having benefits, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36501901141 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92527671375 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7478958183 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245224994169 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694385844667 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741243623714 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134519650296 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933215737366 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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