Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many local states require their teenagers to be out to do the unpair work for helping their communities. This essay will shed some light on both pros and cons of it. Although this has several disadvantages, I still think that the advantages may be far more.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are some snags in requiring young people to do unpair work for helping local citizens. In fact, teenagers often have rebellious personalities, which they don’t want to follow the available requirements. This has overwhelmingly negative reactions against their authorities. Therefore, they have immoral behaviors and unfortunate results. Another point that need to be considered is that young generations use all their time for chatting in social media such as facebook, zalo, yahoo messenger , which they have not enough time for doing the unpair work.
Nevertheless, there are also many benefits to doing the unpair work for help local citizens by young people. Indeed, by doing the volunteer works, teenagers understand the value of friendship, which they often to think about the socially useful works such as helping other people, sympathizing with disabilities people. In addition, by doing the unpair job, young generation have no free time for breaking laws or having the negative behaviors. By way of illustration, there are no confliction in my neighbor in summer season because their children usually take part the unpair works. As a result, the number of negative factors affecting social and community will decline day by day.
In conclusion, I still hold the belief that disadvantages are overshadowed by advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27376425856 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90102802699 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7627533245 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263684806788 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832022009616 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947097769735 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140185911015 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604749527021 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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