Some people think that all university students should STUDY WHATEVER THEY LIKE. Others believe that they should only be ALLOWED TO STUDY subjects that WILL BE USEFUL IN THE FUTURE, such as those RELATED TO science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that students who study in the university should learn whatever they are fond of.However,it is better they should be forced into certain key subject areas which will be benefical later in their life.
Obviously ,students should choose subjects which they like for a number of reason.Firstly,teenagers will have motivation to be study better than they have to study subject which do not interested in with them .For example,if young adults study about science and technology,they will want to study subject as math,chemistry,and physics,and they can achive good academic performance.Secondly,young adults are passionate about what they are learning,so they can be successful in their career.The more they love subject which they study in the university,the more they apply their knowledge into work.
However,I believe that university students should be learn major that will be helpful in the future.Firstly,it support students save time because they only focus on main subject for their major,and then they can early graduation to earn money as soon as possible.Secondly, courses provide for students more benefits as better salaries,career progession which leads to hav a good quality of life.The earlier they graduate,the earlier they approach to obtain a lot of real experience,and then they can progress rapidly in their career.
In conclusion although people argue teenagers should learn the subject which they have interest in,I personally students should study major that will be benefical in their future which helps them soon chosen profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61087866109 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49196207427 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.969283018 49.4020404114 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.25 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.75 20.7667163134 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.75 7.06120827912 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40530765586 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.291944947186 0.084324248473 346% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579393131054 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291944947186 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579393131054 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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