In the era of modernisation, it is necessary for each and every individual to realise the value of education. Life without education is like a bird without wings. Some individuals believe that all university learners should study whatever they want while others opine that they should only be allowed those study subjects which will be useful in the future period such as science and technology. I, however side with former view.
There are many reasons why individuals think that university learners should study those subjects which they like. To embark with, learners have a more interest in a particular field and mainly focus upon their study. Therefore, they can easily grab new things. Secondly, there would be less burden on students and without more pressure, they can easily get better marks in studies. In addition, they make their future bright and secure. Moreover, learners doing a hard working and also creates more curiosity to get more knowledge about a particular field. They become specialised in that field.
On the other hand, science and technology is now widely acceptable at global level. Both study subjects provides a better job opportunities to individuals and they can easily raise their life-standard. Thus, nothing is possible in the field of agriculture, industry as well as in hospitality without science and technology because everything is depend upon these subjects. The demand of science and technology is not only increased but also it provides the satisfaction and various benefits to the community.
In my point of view, students should choose those subjects which they want to study. Yet,it cannot be denied that to study in a science and technology is much better because is increasing at a gigantic rate.
Can u tell me sir how I get
Can u tell me sir how I get better score in writing because in my previous essay I also got 5.5 out of 9. Can u tell me which mistake m doing again and again.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
some words are repeated. Look:
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1431 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.039 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.637 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.706 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.827 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ubjects which they like. To embark with, learners have a more interest in a parti...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be less burden on students and without more pressure, they can easily get bette...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ce and technology because everything is depend upon these subjects. The demand of scie...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...e subjects which they want to study. Yet,it cannot be denied that to study in a sci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20494699647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71009301093 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6502647418 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394540514941 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103520978945 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161321522368 0.0667982634062 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247102320465 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145575974944 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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