Some people think that animals should be kept in man made cells. What are the disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos.
It is universal truth that such as human and animals would like to live in the open air area thus, they would feel more independent. But, majority of people who believe that the government must be makes the parks and gardens for animals and can be live by man made cells. There are number of demerit's this development outweigh it's few merits.
On the one hand, I would explains the justification that national parks would not be better place living for animals. Firstly, according to experts like the forest king the lion which lives in man made cells since about for 15 years then it's possibility they would be forget the original ability and become more unhealthy. Moreover, some zoos in the world which can unenable to provide the best facilities like treatment, environment and food the reason behind could be that they have got lack money and experience. Besides this, my view of point zoos which are become to the bussiness this might be because of nowadays, number of individual who would like to see the terrible animals in parks. So for that their to buy the entry pass or parking ticket for personal vehicles.
On the other hand, some researchers think that in the global there are few forests where temperature remains always hot. So, its very hard for animals to find the food or water in forest but, on the contrary if they live in zoos then possibilities their gets better quality food also in daily routine. Secondly, if animals would be live in zoos rather than the forests then it's more possibility they would be feel safe more and no scare about that other animals can attack during their sleeping time at night.
In conclusion, I opine that moving animals forests to zoos has more effective ways to protect the endangered species. While, zoos have not provided more facilities for animals with which they are loss the talent or hunting skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74153846154 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35540421034 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0381760152 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195161990509 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756023917722 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680648712304 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136349327538 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459614930372 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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