The two pie chart shows to online shopping sales in Canada from 2005 to 2010.
The couple of pie charts illustrates the information about that the compare to the percentage of inline shopping sales across in retailer sectors in Canadian between 2005 and 2010.
It is quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that the online sales of electronic and furnishings had dropped, however, in native of Canadian more spend money on food and video games, over given period of times.
To commence with, in 2005, about 35% of electronic equipment was the highest sold product in Canada, while the figure had next five years later fall down to 30% by 2010, respectively. Similarly, the online sales of furnishings at just one quater in 2005 but, by 2010, the number of shopping sales for home furnishing decreased to 15%.
On the other hand, initially year in 2005, in Canada, people not like to more brought food through web accounted for 22% whereas, the proportion of online sales for food slightly increased to 32% by 2010. finally, the number of Canadian people in 2005 less than money spend on video games which was 18%, with surprisingly after half decade ago the figure had accelerated and reached to nearly under one quater.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...food slightly increased to 32% by 2010. finally, the number of Canadian people in 2005 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, look, similarly, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46909269425 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.1885856542 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 5.23603664747 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296985854869 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146421250349 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891258913188 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180371162194 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084173887691 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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