Some people think that government should pay for health care and education, but others individual claims it is the people responsibility. Discuss both point of view and give your opinions.
A hotly debatable issue today relates to that health treatment and education it's significant important for that government must pay the income for community. But, other people think that is not crucial, with they become to more helpless and needless. In this essay I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning benefits if authority use to taxes as provide free medical and study. These include enchanced people more safe money and financial condition strong. Firstly, in current century household equipment and foods resources are more expensive for this reason not very affluent people never thought that money spend on own children rather than they also forces and encourage to doing work as labour with which they contribute to improve the own economic condition. Thus, it is better way that authority open to the school where all rich and poor people inequality with along enable to teach and gain knowledge. Moreover, now in this era medicine and treatment are more expensive so for that it's necessary government open to the free health care medical everywhere in the world, with establish the good infrastructure like garden, gym where people daily enable to go for walk with which that always fit and fine.
On the other hand, some experts believe that if authority only focus on both facilities then they never improve the own country economic condition. Secondly, in modern world surgery and operation is not very cheaper such as heart attack, cancer treatment, and kidney transplantation for this reason government not use the public funds on expensive health treatment. Furthermore, in the same way higher education and college life very hard to financial so they thought authority must only provide to the free primary level education with which community of a ting burden can be reduced then prepare to surfer other expense.
In conclusion, it can be seen that whereas the government spend money and provide the limited facilities then has brought some advantages such as people are afford to the household equipment and food, however, they never contribute to improve the financial condition to own nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'force'
Suggestion: force
...d on own children rather than they also forces and encourage to doing work as labour w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12324929972 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55579485576 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535014005602 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8911331561 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.416666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197831713406 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760719553138 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420672108467 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131371939558 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629022920964 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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