Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that raising the minimum driving age is the best solution to enhance road safety. I disagree with this idea because I believed that other methods are equally important and should be taken into account as well.
On the one hand, I agree that increasing the minimum age for getting driving license can be an effective road safety measure. Firstly, since people are open more mature and have more life experience when they get older, they can make quicker and wiser decisions to avoid dangerous situations on the road compared to younger drivers. My father, for example, will never use his phone when driving as he known that it can be a dangerous distraction for him and draw his attention away from the road. Secondly, raising the minimum driving age can allow adolescents to have more time to sharpen their driving skills. They can attend defensive driving course to learn how to deal with different driving scenarios, which help them minimize the risk of accidents when driving in the future.
On the other hand, I believed that better road safety can be achieved by more effective methods without increasing the driving age. To begin with, more stringent traffic regulations should be imposed, which would act as a deterrent to would-be traffic lawbreakers. In our country, the government should be grant heavy punishment and it would be applied for the drivers who run the red light. Therefore it makes the driver more responsible in order to avoid future punishment s. In addition, authorities should allocate financial resources to improving public transport and road maintenance, which would encourage citizens to use public transport despite driving private cars or motorbike. As a result, these residents will no longer worry about the risk they are faced when driving their own vehicle, such as drunk driving or falling asleep at the wheel.
In conclusion, while raising the legal driving age make our roads safer to some extent, I believe that governments should also introduce other road safety measure that is discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
... never use his phone when driving as he known that it can be a dangerous distraction ...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'granted'?
Suggestion: granted
...n our country, the government should be grant heavy punishment and it would be applie...
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Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... for the drivers who run the red light. Therefore it makes the driver more responsible in...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0796460177 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53374644387 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572271386431 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4825809884 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255844569676 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958595135655 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813417486096 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165051475913 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386597709944 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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