Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Crime is a serious and growing problem in most of the societies. The crime rate in different countries is increasing day by day. Although some people believe that long time prison sentences is the effective way to decline crime, others think that other different methods can reduce crime. I agree with the letter view.
There are benefits of longer period on imprisonment. Firstly, in prison, different prison services help the offenders to rehabilitate. It helps them to re-educate, as a result, it discourage them to re-offend crime. Secondly, it is also a lesson for the individuals who are thinking of committing crimes. So, it deterrent them to commit different law breaking activities.
There are also some drawbacks of longer period of prison sentences. The offenders who committed minor crimes meet with highly profiled criminals in prison. Therefore, it is a possibility that these criminals can influence to do more crimes.
On the other hand, other against the longer prison sentences and think that other best method can help to reduce crime in the societies. One of the alternative way is community services. This type of services can help the offenders to feel guilty about what they have done and also improve their character. In assistant to this, it also helps the government to know more about different crime, so that they can analyze it and can prevent new types of crimes.
To sum up, from the above discussion it is clear that a longer period of imprisonment is not the best way to reduce crime. For the reduction of crime rate, other methods are also effective. So, the government should apply these methods to decrease the different crime rates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'discourages'?
Suggestion: discourages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02867383513 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69592192311 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505376344086 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3757145481 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8421052632 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6842105263 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283894949119 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894455330775 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856134282794 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171343602071 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743891867563 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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