Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, environmental problems are increasingly concerned among a large group of popularity. While some people think that raising the petrol costs is the most efficient way to preserve the environment, I agree that taking that measure is good for our habitat but there are other equally effective ways to address this issue.
First of all, increasing the fuel cost does help reduce the pollution in many parts of the planet to a certain degree. When making the fuel more expensive, the vehicle volumes on roads can drop to the minimum. In addition to that, the amount of fume emitted from cars using fuels will certainly decrease so that the air becomes fresher than ever. However, this phenomenon will not stay still in a long term period since raising petrol costs makes factories increase production and more pollutants are released.
Second, there is a myriad of effective measures that governments should take with an aim to preserve the surrounding habitat. One of them is investing in green technology. By making eco-friendly sources of energy more accessible and affordable, we can greatly reduce our negative impact on the environment. Another way is to educate citizens about the paramount importance of the environment as well as its effects on human beings. Once people grasp an in-depth knowledge about environment, they will start environmentally-friendly activities such as switching their private fuel car into an electric one or being more responsible with the domestic waste.
In conclusion, increasing the price of petrol is one of good measures to solve environmental issues, and other ways should also be taken into great consideration.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23134328358 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01878355175 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1503295658 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226127243777 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711905850967 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620285896027 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141570039857 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729560468574 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.