Some people think that children should start primary school later in life, others that they should staart it before 7.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals argues that young children shouldn't be indulged in schooling at the early stage of their life while others argues that sending them to schools before the age of 7 in better for them.Although, the childhood of anyone is a very precious time and that should only be used in developing better understandings and relationships with their family but the habbit of learning in the initials the years would help the children in growing more mental ability.
Many people states that starting the primary school later in life would be very beneficial for the new young generation.They beleived that after the children have developed a better understanding of language and surrounding they can learn faster and better for instance, a 10 year old child can learn the alphabets and counting way faster than a 5 year old because of their better mental capabilities.Due to all these reasons people are inclined towards giving the education of the young ones later in life.
However, I believe that if initial years of life are used properly that may lead to a better logical and learning skills.Young developing brains are best for getting hold of anything ,children learn the most important things like walking,talking,language etc. in this stage which are stored for life in their brains.for example a study done by the Cambridge University states that an adult learning a language will take much more time than a child learning it from his or her childhood.
In conclusion,while many thinks that young age shouldn't be wasted on mugging up school homework but studies have shown that a developing brain is best for schooling.For all these reasons I believe that parents should start giving children a habit of education and knowledge which will raise their curiosity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08219178082 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02664560185 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.752827016 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.8 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193734659583 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102365360584 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619631873287 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122842277257 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517929773812 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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