Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have different views on the beginning of study. Some people suggest that children should commence their formal education as early as possible while others think that lately commencement of academic schooling would be far more beneficial. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion and this will be clarified on this essay.
On the one hand, starting school at a young age would generate a number of positive outcomes. First and foremost, the younger students are, the easier it is for them to acquire novel knowledge. For example, scientific research has illustrated that language acquisition ability is greater at the young age than at the older one; therefore, these children would gain more advantages in the future. Secondly, children would have more chances to engage in extracurricular activities which would equip them with vital soft skills such as teamwork and communication skills, thus contributing to the formation of their charateristics and easily integrating into the educational environment in the upcoming years.
On the other hand, I hold the belief that it is more advantageous for children to have a later start in formal schooling. Firstly, in formative years, youngsters should be encouraged to learn and discover the surroundings through playing than tedious hours in classroom because they are psychologically unready, and formal education is associated with homework and regulations, which creates excessive stress and develops a fear of learning for children. The one more reason is that children at their early ages need more exercise because at this stage the development of their body is an essential aspect. Children, first of all, must be healthy. If they maintain their sedentary lifestyle in class, they will easily gain their weight and will be more likely to suffer from obesity and diabetes in the future.
In conclusion, I think children should have their careless childhood with no responsibility. Moreover, I sure that playing helps them develop not only their physical health but also their ability to make decisions, analyze things, which is very helpful for their future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30588235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87563893908 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3868841544 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217596214238 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785815117916 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619009649856 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132266199996 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484066089634 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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