SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT DEVELOPED COUNTRIES HAVE A HIGHER RESPONSIBILITY TO COMBAT CLIMATE CHANGE THAN DEVELOPING COUNTRIES. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ALL COUNTRIES SHOULD HAVE THE SAME RESPONSIBILITIES TOWARDS PROTECTING THE ENVIRONMENT.DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT DEVELOPED COUNTRIES HAVE A HIGHER RESPONSIBILITY TO COMBAT CLIMATE CHANGE THAN DEVELOPING COUNTRIES. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ALL COUNTRIES SHOULD HAVE THE SAME RESPONSIBILITIES TOWARDS PROTECTING THE ENVIRONMENT.

DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

Climate change is a global issue which requires urgent responses from countries regardless of their development status. Any country should act on global warming depending on their capacity. Yet, views are divided on taking stake over the issue, should it be the developed countries or the developing ones. This essay will discuss both opinions and progress towards my opinion on the same.

Anthropogenic climate change is the result of industrialization, exploitation of resources and mass consumption and developed nations are responsible for this. For instance, oil extraction affects marine life that has a significant role in maintaining ecology. Also, if we look at the world scenario affluent countries are the ones who have large-scale industries liking mining, oil extraction and manufacturing industries. Needless to say, they are the ones manufacturing and operating huge volumes of automobiles that produce toxic gases. Furthermore, the society of these nations are highly consumerist which give hugely in producing carbon footprints that contribute on green-house effect. Thus, developed nations with their industrial and consumerist characteristics looks fair to have higher obligation in tackling the issue, not to forget they are wealthy too.

However, climate change being a local issue as well, hits hard to developing countries which they are bound to respond. Though developmental activities could be a regular agenda, focus should be on sustainable development with sufficient consideration to the environment. Some initiatives like awareness program on global warming at community level can be organized to educate people about global warming issues and its minimization. This will result in informed local people who can practice environment friendly activities.

In summary, climate change is a glocal pressing issue which needs concerns from both global and local level stakeholders. As developed countries being industrious and mass consumers has detrimental effect on the environment they are liable to fight against global warming. However, developing nations can put educational initiative to aware people. So, in my view both should have collaborative stake over the environmental issue.

WITH THE INCREASED GLOBAL DEMAND IN OIL AND GAS, UNDISCOVERED AREAS OF THE WORLD SHOULD BE OPENED UP TO ACCESS MORE RESOURCES.

TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?

With the increase in global population, consumption of non-renewable energy has been ever increasing. However, it is highly debatable whether to explore new sites of energy resources of oil and gas, or seek alternate resources for environment protection. With consideration about the adverse impact of such expedition, I strongly disagree with the view of discovering new location for hunting resources. This essay will argue why further resources hunting for oil and gas should be discouraged rather seek other energy resources and progress towards my opinion on the same.

Firstly, oil and gas are non-renewable resources, meaning once they are depleted from their existing source they cannot be refilled up. Unfortunately, many other areas will be screened that might end up with possibilities of power banks in an inhabited land; the result are inhuman. Take and example of America, where they tried to displace indigenous people, which was the site for enormous oil resources. With this one representative example, the point here is to what extent the resource hunting will continue on; till when; given the unstoppable population growth? Hence, there is no positive future if economists and scientists believe to excavate lands or drill oceans just to suffice the power demands.

Furthermore, the exploitation of resources has been proved to have adverse effect to the environment. Oil spills on the Pacific Ocean is a solid example of it. Another example is the Australian bight, where marine life is severely damaged; species are endangered. This has huge impact on the ecology. Yet, hopefully, there are other energy options that can be helpful for the increasing demands. For instance, petroleum cars can be replaced by solar or electric cars. Gas induced cooking stoves can be substituted by electric stoves.

In conclusion, with the population boom, demands are limitless, but the powerhouse are limited; further resource exploitation is impractical. Thus, considering the aforementioned argument I strong disagree that newer areas should be opened for resource access as it has detrimental impact on the environment, whilst huge potentiality for alternative energy use.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in summary, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 13.1623246493 319% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3913.0 1615.20841683 242% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 694.0 315.596192385 220% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63832853026 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13262893113 4.20363070211 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05881547334 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 350.0 176.041082164 199% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504322766571 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1235.7 506.74238477 244% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 16.0721442886 236% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8963286285 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.973684211 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 8.67935871743 242% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219706238884 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052212818281 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621559276982 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935810378586 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096503805882 0.056905535591 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 211.0 78.4519038076 269% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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