Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that solving environmental issues are too enormous for individuals. While a number of people say that individuals could find some solutions, I would argue that I am in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, the global issues could not be solved without assistance of governments. In fact, the governments have more power than individuals in these fields. For instance, they could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories. Also, they have budget source to invest in renewable energy from solar, wind or water power; then forcing companies use them to reduce the reliance on fossil fuels. Thereby, the governments play vital in solving environmental problems.
On the other hand, solving environmental issues should be the responsibility not only of governments but also of individuals. There are many actions people could do to reduce environmental pollution such as taking pubic transports rather than driving, using paper bags instead of plastics bags. Individuals should join one of the organisations which form part of the green movement, in order to campaign for chances to official policy on the environment or participating events relevant to improving environment. For example, people could support Earth Hour – one of the most influential campaign in the world because turning lights off one hour can save a lot of power and money.
In conclusion, although governments are key factors influencing environmental problems solving, it seems to me that individuals also make contribution to these issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
... environmental pollution such as taking pubic transports rather than driving, using p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34710743802 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05062805578 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632231404959 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.662587238 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244760293874 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872769522264 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459528064696 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153093739214 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365262192961 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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