some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally
Discuss bot sides and give your opinion.
Recently, talk about environmental issues become problem that attract International attention. There are valid opinions on both sides, which I will consider now.
On the one hand, some people feel that environmental problem which is problem now days is global warming that is causes climate change such as global climate map shifts, climate anomalies, flood, drought, storm, rising sea level and others. In addition, cause of occurrence global warming are from several countries especially developed country has potential big contribution of factors that impact all over the world for instance, greenhouse effect, increased burning of fossil fuels from motorized vehicles, air pollution from factories, illegal login so that the forest area is reduced. Some people believe that this causes is should be solved on a global scale.
On the other hand, though, this is a global problem, but the source of problem from all states so that should each countries keep the environment such as wiser in using motorized vehicles also do tree planting movements. Furthermore, the important of maintaining environment in each states with avoid causative factors, because environmental damaging action not only effect on country itself but also on a global. Finally, with awareness all countries on keep does not any damage would help protect the earth.
Overall, I feel that to solve the problem will be better on a International scale. It is a big problem that source from the whole world. World organization can take action for this issue. But also between two opinions should does together, because with corporate among nation with universal scale would be optimum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33969465649 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68581090379 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.1908067011 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26874171391 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107135727697 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101932543104 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151718761013 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602835504247 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.