Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Education is the fundamental rights for each and every citizen due to the fact that it will not only benefit to the particular person but also that of nation so, University should be conscious while making any decision. people pounder that to acquire knowledge from the university is Paramount one thus, administrative ought to make University fees free of cost whether the fees is huge or low. I firmly consummate discord to the writer notion and reason of my inclination is articulated in the upcoming paragraph.

The predominant justification to support my ideology is that the university have the own methods and criteria to run the university in proper way also whenever college begin to provide free education to the pupil then by passing the time student will likely to lose the interest and concentration on studies. In other words, guidance pay huge amount of fee to the college in terms of they son in order to obtain superior knowledge and in that case parenting pressure will meeting towards the tutee in terms of of studies then student would depicts some Inquisitive. otherwise free of cost knowledge will vanished student imagination. For instance , in New Zealand, almost more than 85% of parents is being charged fees by the university.

Considering further, It is well known fact that education plays a Paramount role in everyone life so every student must acquire knowledge yet if any student have trouble from dearth of financial income then in that matter University ought to charge half amount of money from they entire fees rather than given fully registration. To epitome, in Singapore, appropriate more than 70% of college charge 50% of fees from the entire amount. As a consequence, we no one will likely to be absent to Grab the knowledge.

In conclusion, although Knowledge plays an crucial one to come up in life, however, providing the free of cost knowledge is an inferior idea as well as it looks like an giving birth to the indolent person.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95195195195 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7694546043 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.3210709301 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.909090909 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167888583834 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583800083048 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481211615886 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948181820605 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466324080684 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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