Some people think that experiments on animals is cruel whereas others are aginest them.
discuss other views and give your opinion.
Certain individuals believe that the experimentation on animals is cruel,whereas, others are against them and they claim that it is crucial for scientific research and advancements.Both views will be depicted in impending paragraphs.
There are numerous reasons about why people think that experiments on animals are cruel activities.first and foremost is animal death during experiment.When researchers find new medicines they test these medicines on animals and sometimes, animals lose their lives.So because of human development, animals are dying that is the reason some people are against them.secondly,animals are helping to keep up eco-system balance so doing maximum experiments on them can make problems.For instance,according to survey conducted by harvest university shows that the amount of chimpanzees is reducing every year because they are captured by humans for experiments.
In contrast, it is claimed by some people that experiments on animals help scientists to find new pills.firstly,when they find new medicines so the experiment on animals help them to know about what are drawbacks and merits.Secondly,these experiment sometimes help to know about how animals are using their brains to solve problems.To illustrate,in multifarious lab ,people are making some obstacles in and animals strive to solve these.consequently,research find that chimpanzees activities are similar to human and their mind is more developed as compare to other animals.
To conclude,both views have it's own pros and crons.but in my perspective the experiments on animals help to know about the disadvantages of medicines and their behaviour towards human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8606557377 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88825366043 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.091891069 49.4020404114 413% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 357.5 106.682146367 335% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269344328007 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162578434597 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482731575873 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162578434597 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482731575873 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.7 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.36 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.6 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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