The maps below show the changes that have taken place at queen mary hospital since its construction in 1960.
The transformations that have taken place at queen mary hospital since it's construction in 1960 has been depicted by given three diagrams.
One glance is enough to make it clear that certain modifications can be observed and new buildings have been built in maps.
It is clear that a main road had gone From west to south direction in both maps.in 1960,there was a shopping centur in west-north side and below the shopping centre farmland and beside shopping century hospital can be seen.whereas car park place had built in south side.however it is interesting to see that all buildings area was same in 1960 map.
Moving further, in last two maps,five buildings was observed.while hospital and pharmacy area can be subjugated in same side of the maps.but in 1980,New cancer centure building had been added.however in 2000,this centure area was expended and nursing school place shrank.car park had available near the nursing school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 313, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...wever it is interesting to see that all buildings area was same in 1960 map. Moving ...
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Line 13, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , five
...p. Moving further, in last two maps,five buildings was observed.while hospital a...
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Line 13, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ital and pharmacy area can be subjugated in same side of the maps.but in 1980,New...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90806341782 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.154295064 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222989844752 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176430618371 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205937331574 0.0843802449381 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176430618371 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205937331574 0.0819641961636 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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