Some People think that family has an influence on child's development, while others think that there are many factors that influence child such as television, music and friends.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is frequently believed that family plays an imperative role in upbringing children, while there is another point of view, that the different entertainment like hanging out with friends or series affect it more. this essay will discuss why nuclear family has more impact on youngsters than their social milieu, not including relatives.
Those who agree with this view that such faucets of the children’s life as activities or interests are capable determine their future or even personality have a number of various reasons to support it. I have to acknowledge, surroundings of people have done their part and they can influent on child’s decisions or even prejudge its future profession. For example, if kid liked certain subject in the school, it might choose the major connecting with the subject or which teacher can recommend. Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this view wholly, since I am concerned those people determine children’s life, who spend with them most of time.
Proponents of above-mentioned view said that parents play a crucial role in children’s life. I find this statement quite truthful, because in majority of cases parents alter entertainments and define many of aspects of their springs’ life. For instance, even if child has chosen their future specialization due to the favorite school subject it is not necessary becomes true, because final decision always belongs to its parents and depends on their financial capabilities and preferences.
Taking everything into account, many factors determine children’s destiny, some people think that friends and hobbies mostly whereas others believe that family is one who is responsible for that. In my opinion, family is something that accompanies every person during the whole life from the childhood to the adult life; consequently, it makes the greatest contribution on people’s living and personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54576271186 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11454040991 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637288135593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1486969005 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.727272727 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138139192588 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521280423063 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419750954687 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866963614685 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431845253339 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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