Some people think that good health is essential to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?
Everyone need a good health to live happily and many people think that state-owned hospital should be responsible for these health care. In my view, the pros will far outweigh the cons if we choose private facilities for medical care.
It is obvious that patients have to pay higher prices for medical services in private hospitals than in state-owned ones. While many people are struggling to pay for the bill of housing, food or even education, the cost related to medical services seems to mean the burden of their lives that need to be supported by the government. Obviously, the huge number of inhabitants in developing countries cannot afford the cost of good care service in profit-making companies. Moreover, the patients choosing private facilities cannot have the chance to receive the money subsidized by the countries if they are actually poor and cannot afford to medical treatments.
Nonetheless, private hospitals are usually invested by a huge budget from large companies or even overseas. By using a massive amount of money efficiently, the modern facilities, advanced technologies or even good management could be attractive to patients from many regions. For example, there are many patients who prefer to choose the place including quiet atmosphere and good care service are offered. In fact, state-owned hospitals are usually overcrowded and overloaded. Moreover, the high salaries and the policy of promotion could draw many professionals and talents in medical fields, which help to attract more and more patients from different regions. But this type of hospital is only suitable for those who have good conditions.
In conclusion, the high cost of care services and treatments could be a challenge for those who earn low - medium salaries. But it is truly appropriate for those who have conditions to receive a high-quality service.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this health' or 'these healths'?
Suggestion: this health; these healths
...wned hospital should be responsible for these health care. In my view, the pros will far out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, nonetheless, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28956228956 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86493276308 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2531384087 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219838619311 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776209244544 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725120184576 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146949547235 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924562552659 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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