Some people think that good health is important to everyone, so medical health services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?
Nowadays, many hold the view that profit-making companies ought not to operate medical services since they can do harm to the public health. However, there is a body of opinion which claims that private healthcare can bring about more advantages to everyone’s health. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that the patients would benefit from profit-making companies due to its better medical services they can enjoy .There are fewer patients in hospitals run by profit-making companies in order that doctors and nurses can spend more time in taking care of their visitors. In addition, the patients could receive the treatment immediately since private hospitals are usually nearby the community and the sick can see doctors quickly when they are in emergency.
On the other hand, nonetheless, private medical could prevent the poor from seeing the doctor. Since the medical services may be extremely expensive, unresonable and far from affrdable, it would delay the time when poor patients see doctors. Furthermore, it would also aggravate health problems as the purpose of those companies is making profits. To be specific, they would concentrate on declining the cost of materials to gain profit, so some fake medicine that allows little money to produce and is only produced to obtain sales occurred, which really damages patients’ health.
To summarise, there is no doubt that private companies could let patients receive treatment fast and enjoy the better medical services. At the same time, nevertheless, private medical industry could be detrimental to the poor and causes healthy problems. In the final analysis, therefore, one can only conclude that the disadvantage of profit-making companies responsible for medical industry outweigh the positive effect it brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38907849829 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86504490982 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2921129907 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.583333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266173361323 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949936337495 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575001460304 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162041320235 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460421623171 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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