Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is argued that sports are considered as indispensable parts of human being’s lives. Some people have assumed that extreme sports should be prohibited by the authorities, while detractors claim that individuals should be free to indulge in diverse physical sports or activities. From my perspective, people should be given more liberty to choose such spots as they wish.
On the one hand, there is a range of reason why risk sports should be forbidden by being taken by the populace. First and foremost, these sorts of sports tend to pose various issues related to the safety of the players as they may get severely injured or even get killed. For example, it is likely to break bones while engaging in these extreme sports, this would have adverse impacts on their daily life. Besides, collapsing may be detrimental to their own psychology aspects because the percentage of recovery is intensely low, more precisely, in the later years, they may deprive them of necessary activities and heavily rely on supporting of people surrounded them. Furthermore, some dangerous sports, such as boxing, judo, mostly represent violence. Hence these sports’ audiences, especially adolescents, would probably be encouraged to aggressive thoughts or improper behaviours in their lives.
On the other hand, even though some extreme sports sometimes lead to fatalities, it is more beneficial that such sports should be not prohibited as they yield enormous advantages to the participants. In this day and age, as organizations providing dangerous sports have been increasing meticulous about the procedure and protective equipment. This would be guaranteed that participants would be safe while attending these sports. Therefore, they will stand chances to chase their dreams and preferences, it makes an important contribution to relieving stress and refreshing themselves for a long time working under pressure at their own workplaces. Equally important, citizens have their rights to do whatever they wish, and it should be respected instead of prohibiting by laws.
In conclusion, although there are some factors that government should impose strict regulations to protect the safety of residents. I side with the conviction that citizens are at liberty to play extreme sport owing to their preferences and its considerable benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43526170799 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91555078325 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589531680441 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9147711104 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.3125 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243288445419 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840513445451 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612334831197 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163390480421 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504671860049 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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