Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention. While others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that the government should be accountable for crime prevention, while others believe that every person ought to have responsibility to defend against crime. I strongly believe on first one because every time individual cannot protect themselves from offenders and fear of punishment restricts people from committing an offense.
On the one hand, self- defense is one of the most efficient ways to be safe from crime and criminals. By learning certain skills such as Kungfu, Karate and boxing, people can be independent and they can protect themselves as well as their family to be a victim of lethal crime. For example, in Japan, getting black belt in Karate is mandatory for every student because people think their children can fight with unforeseen circumstances by mastering in karate. Thus it is clear that why every individual should take responsibility for preventing criminal activities. However, this method in not preferable all the time as people do not have idea how criminals commit crime.
On the other hand, people think that responsibility for crime prevention solely relies on government because they have right to carry out and implement strong law against illegal activities. Government can prevent citizens by tightening the rules and ensuring police department is proactive because there is a limit in people’s ability to defend criminals. For instance, the reason for 0.2% crime rates in the USA is strict rules and proactive crime departments according to a survey. I think solid laws such as death penalty implemented by government can reduce crime as people stay away from illegal activities due to fear of getting punished.
In conclusion, safeguarded against crime by own can be an effective method to get protection from criminals although liable rules are necessary to scare people so that they do not intend to involve in crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 462, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26158940397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82013668349 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.6124375526 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358937233463 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137297278331 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824196777619 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226530829191 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805089707146 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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