Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?
There is a school of thought that health care and education have become the focus of the people’s concern in many recent decades. Nevertheless, it is a controversial debate to who should pay for these services. In my opinion, while I agree that basic health care and education should be on the government, the costs of advanced health care and higher education should be borne by individuals.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that it is the government’s responsibility to make basic health care and primary education accessible to everyone. The first reasons to support it is that a nation’s prosperity very much depends on the contributions made by its well-educated residents who are in good condition of health. Moreover, we should see from thousands of people in Africa, a region which is infamous for poverty, are starving the default of basic necessities such as food or eventually fresh water. If they did not have moneys to pay for foods, drinks or clothes, there is no doubt that they could not pay for health services and education. It stands to the reason that private schools and hospitals can be available for those who want and can afford it but the free schools and free government hospitals should always be opened.
On the other hand, people should be responsible for their advanced education or some higher services of health that they want. Actually, the advanced medical and surgical treatments are very expensive in every aspect. So, instead of depending on government, they should take some health insurances or save in any other way with the tomorrow in mind.
Furthermore, higher education could benefit the knowledge of individuals more than the nation. For this reason, it is quite reasonable to pay for it from one’s pocket.
As the aforementioned reasons, there are some sections of society who cannot afford their own healthcare. Hence, the government should build a system of knowing their financial status and provide free healthcare so that nobody dies even if they did not have money to pay for. As far as higher education is concerned, the ministry of education should have some system of interest free loans for the needy and gifted students.
In a nutshell, it seems to me that basic healthcare and primary education should be shouldered by the government but advanced services of both areas should be paid by individual from their pocket.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...or poverty, are starving the default of basic necessities such as food or eventually fresh water....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04511278195 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88892102032 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6648271447 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.411764706 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295826504588 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099180143663 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054483275764 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155904198548 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596597946774 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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