Opinion is still divided when it comes to speaking about the rule of the government in our daily life. Some believe that the government should play a minor role in the life of citizens while other on the other hand support the idea that the state should have more power. One of the most delicate issues of last decaded revolve around healthcare and educational system. In many developed countries, like in Europe, citizens subsidize the healthcare and educationa spending with taxation. Other countries follow an alternative route, like the US, adopting a system where much of the costs have to be payd by the citizens on their own. Both of these systems have pros and cons and in this essay I will briefly examine both of them and explain why I think that government should provide free healthcare and education.
In the US most of the citizens have an health insurance which cover most of the common diseases. But financial hardships can follow following loss of job or more serious illness like cancer. In this case an individual has to struggle to gain access to medical treatment and in many cases people cannot afford them. Although the US has the best medical centers in the world and the most advanced technologies, still too many people are excluded from basic medical care. Governments programs like MediCare aims to tackle this problem, so that in this case the state has provided a sound solution to a serious problem who has been affecting mostly poor and weak citizens. Furthermore, students have to pay high college tuition so that students coming from less well off families have to take loans from a bank and get into debts.
In Europe usually the government plays a crucial role in allocating resources for the healthcare and educational system, so that medical treatments are accessible for all citizens with no regard of income and universities also offer the possibility to free access if students come from low-income families. This approach is to me the most situable because no one has left behind. Tough moments, financial difficulties, diseases or unemployment can always come up over the years. In those moment is therefore essential that basic rights like education and medical care are granted. For those reasons I strongly believe that the goverment should be more involved in the life of the citizens, by providing them efficient and affordable cures and by offering a decent educational system, so that nobody cannot be discharged from an hospital or forced to drop out of college because too ill or too poor.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... In the US most of the citizens have an health insurance which cover most of th...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this moment' or 'those moments'?
Suggestion: this moment; those moments
...t can always come up over the years. In those moment is therefore essential that basic right...
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Line 5, column 826, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o that nobody cannot be discharged from an hospital or forced to drop out of colle...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, i think, speaking about, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60772805282 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550116550117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6594827207 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.647058824 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177534177489 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050583221574 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475868645593 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116801659658 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573674338967 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... In the US most of the citizens have an health insurance which cover most of th...
^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this moment' or 'those moments'?
Suggestion: this moment; those moments
...t can always come up over the years. In those moment is therefore essential that basic right...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 826, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o that nobody cannot be discharged from an hospital or forced to drop out of colle...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, i think, speaking about, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60772805282 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550116550117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6594827207 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.647058824 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177534177489 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050583221574 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475868645593 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116801659658 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573674338967 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.